tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3967546324080127384.post5587626291617043017..comments2023-06-23T03:47:09.761-04:00Comments on Andy Bryant - Thinking OutLoud: SHUT-UPAndy Bryanthttp://www.blogger.com/profile/06588839821079257065noreply@blogger.comBlogger13125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3967546324080127384.post-3447064943426161242010-09-02T00:00:23.462-04:002010-09-02T00:00:23.462-04:00Maria, you've shared key information that ties...Maria, you've shared key information that ties this story to reality. If a lady finds herself in this type of situation seeking help is the appropriate step to follow. As our Anonymous commentator has stated prior to your comment, it appears that the female is in grace danger, which you've supported with your comment on reality. I will continue this story soon, thank you for sharing your insight and opinion. ;-)Andy Bryanthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06588839821079257065noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3967546324080127384.post-86457331694211515472010-09-01T23:51:55.378-04:002010-09-01T23:51:55.378-04:00Roberto one word you shared, 'terrifying"...Roberto one word you shared, 'terrifying" means a lot to me. Although I do not write to just terrify people, as I've mentioned in other comments I was afraid as I wrote this story. Terrifying is a good way to describe what I conjured up within myself and it means a lot that this emotion was stirred within you also. Thanks again for sharing.Andy Bryanthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06588839821079257065noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3967546324080127384.post-25434827098125596392010-09-01T23:47:52.562-04:002010-09-01T23:47:52.562-04:00To my Anonymous guest I would like to thank you fo...To my Anonymous guest I would like to thank you for visiting my blog and sharing your comment. :-) Although the female character may seem afraid and unsure of what to do, females are stronger than some people realize - I will have a second part to this story; please check back and share your thoughts.Andy Bryanthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06588839821079257065noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3967546324080127384.post-66532456814345592002010-09-01T23:44:03.036-04:002010-09-01T23:44:03.036-04:00Brandy thanks for sharing your emotional connectio...Brandy thanks for sharing your emotional connection with the female character and how your thoughts towards the male role. As I wrote the story I experienced a similar emotion of fear as the character considered her available options. Reading your post and reflecting back I now realize that my writing "an infected cut" was a type of "emotional outburst" on my part as I felt the festering of the relationship between the two people. Thank you for visiting my blog and sharing your thoughts.Andy Bryanthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06588839821079257065noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3967546324080127384.post-70507408053459768522010-09-01T23:27:35.399-04:002010-09-01T23:27:35.399-04:00Sitaraman, thank you for sharing your personal fee...Sitaraman, thank you for sharing your personal feelings - your comments are welcomed.Andy Bryanthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06588839821079257065noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3967546324080127384.post-25832715049661517342010-09-01T23:11:29.619-04:002010-09-01T23:11:29.619-04:00GrapeChick, with your comment "It was as if I...GrapeChick, with your comment "It was as if I was her..." along with your recognition of my emotional connection with the female character you have made my day!!! Thank you!!Andy Bryanthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06588839821079257065noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3967546324080127384.post-17576647233603690082010-08-23T11:20:02.957-04:002010-08-23T11:20:02.957-04:00A scary story, will try to comment with my poor en...A scary story, will try to comment with my poor english.<br />As you said, in these cases is better to cut the domestic violence at once. If you let the man go on with the physical and psychological violence, a bad end could happen.<br />In Latinamerican countries is often to see many of these cases and all end in tragic deaths.Once you feel you are inside it you must search for help!!,,Maria Eugenianoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3967546324080127384.post-23203301448590579422010-08-16T13:58:42.359-04:002010-08-16T13:58:42.359-04:00I was reading your story and it is very interestng...I was reading your story and it is very interestng. Terrifying, yet interesting in many ways. Good job.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02390781040752377267noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3967546324080127384.post-22326220651782868582010-08-16T00:52:05.941-04:002010-08-16T00:52:05.941-04:00Either the BF is too drunk to stand up or, if it w...Either the BF is too drunk to stand up or, if it was on the far side of the door, he's got the knife. If it's the latter, he knows she tried to kill him and this is her final day.<br /><br />Sounds like he's standing up just fine.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3967546324080127384.post-1915367880994784762010-08-15T16:36:56.298-04:002010-08-15T16:36:56.298-04:00I LOVED it!! I could feel all of the emotions the ...I LOVED it!! I could feel all of the emotions the girl was feeling & I was afraid with her! And I hate that guy for being such an abuser. i was surprised by how easily i could identify with the emotions of the girl. and I loved the comparison of their relationship to an infected cut! very creative!<br /><br />excellent job! <br /><br />can't wait for part 2.Brandyhttp://www.twitter.com/bhamxonoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3967546324080127384.post-74703870110582431352010-08-15T16:03:02.852-04:002010-08-15T16:03:02.852-04:00Andy... Gripping read indeed. Glad that I didnt mi...Andy... Gripping read indeed. Glad that I didnt miss this one. The emotions of the female come out vividly in this write.. It was chilling, it was scary and one felt being there holed up to be saved from the male character..The line 'you're damn right.....' is a powerful one. Looking forward to the sequel. <br />Cheerssridharaahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13980128464993741557noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3967546324080127384.post-66601493036563711782010-08-15T15:00:34.500-04:002010-08-15T15:00:34.500-04:00(As you were the one who brought it up)....
A pos...(As you were the one who brought it up)....<br /><br />A possible ending with the twist. The main character may change her mind...(as Women have the right to.. ;-) ) about the bath.... and say..."Calgon" take me away ;-)Grapechickhttp://www.befirstinc.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3967546324080127384.post-70311294570664757182010-08-15T14:08:03.479-04:002010-08-15T14:08:03.479-04:00WOW!
Wouldn't want to be reading this before I...WOW!<br />Wouldn't want to be reading this before I went to sleep... Very Realistic, Scary, and Nightmarish. <br />I am impressed with your insight to a woman's emotions and feelings. It was as if I were her..as I felt her fear.<br />As we were chatted earlier on Twitter, you have proved the imagination is powerful and it can take the mind anywhere.<br />Thanks for sharing:)<br /><br />GrapechickGrapechickhttp://www.befirstinc.comnoreply@blogger.com